It seems oddly appropriate that, having been working on the editing the Lords of Midnight for the last few weeks, there is still snow lying on the ground here at the official start of spring. It seems the Witchking’s power remains strong!
I’m going to take that as a good omen for now. Lords of Midnight stands at a solid third draft (152,188 words) at present. I’m currently working with my editor to refine that draft into a final version which can be sent for typesetting and, ultimately, printing.
Editing is a bit of a mystical dark art, but essentially it is tightening up the narrative, making the dialogue ‘zing’ and cutting out the unnecessary fat of the story, until you’re left with a lean, pacey story, free from typos with the right speed and energy to make the book absolutely compelling.
Having been through this process a few times now (Lords of Midnight is my sixth full-length novel) I’m always amazed at the improvement a solid edit makes. I’m very blessed to have an superb editor who understands both the genres of fantasy and sci-fi, but also understands the way I write and how I go about it. Only rarely do we disagree on what to do about a phrase or a passage, and that’s usually down to some obscure piece of lore – I typically get a comment in the margin saying “Are you sure this is what you mean?”
Editing is essential for a good book. Authors can procrastinate, fall in love with their world-building, over describe things, get carried away in the dialogue and forget to ground the reader in the scene, screw up points of view and slow the drama at the wrong times. A good editor doesn’t ‘read’ the book, they evaluate it critically, looking for these constructive errors and suggesting fixes. It’s the difference between having a story that ‘shows promise’ and a ‘great story’.
My best claim to fame in this regard is that I occasionally get complaints from my editor that I pull her out of ‘editing mode’ and into ‘reading mode’ and she has to mentally reset and back up before continuing on. I think that’s editor speak for ‘this is good’. 🙂
This work will continue for a while, but we are very close to the end now, folks. Bear with us for a few more weeks and you’ll be able to start your adventure in the lands of Midnight all anew. There’s a glimmer on the eastern horizon, dawn is not far away…